Commander Keen in "Deja View"

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Commander Keen in "Deja View"

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Hi, i'm working on my Keen 1 mod.

Commander Keen in "Friend or Foe"
Episode One: Battle for the Justice

In this episode Commander Keen travels to planet Iris IV.
The atmosphere is the same as on the Earth. Here Keen must stop Oppressor Keen and his evil friends.

Here are some screenshot:

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WHOOAAAHH TRIPPY COLORS
Is that the planet of drugs? :dopekeen
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Well. Oppressor Keen copied the Earth, but didn't succeed too good, that's why looks like this. He calls the planet Iris IV, to proof, on an other planet there's life.
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Looking good!! I see this one will be part of my excitement to play too. Keep up the good work buddy!
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Well, it looks interesting, but isn't it a bit eye-paining to constantly look at? You might want to keep the weird colors but tone down the contrast a bit.

Also, I'm noticing that you're using Keen 4-6 style depth tiles, but he's standing at the extreme edge of them. Won't the player get the feeling that he's constantly in danger of falling off? ;)
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Looks good. Purple and blue is my favorite color combination. However I agree with DaVince in that you should be careful about the contrast. When I first looked at the map level, I thought Keen was standing on the wall, because normally walls are more detailed than the field.

Other than that its a neat idea. I'm curious to see where this will end up going.
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I can't solve the problem right now.


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szemi wrote:I can't solve the problem right now.


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You will though! Keep at it. :)
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Woo, Rasputin.

You do realize the title screen looks all but horrible? The persons all look awkward, with mouths mirrored, white text disappearing on a bright background and strange, super-sayan hair errupting from a Keen clone. O man he needs to get his hair cut and fast.
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DaVince wrote:WHOOAAAHH TRIPPY COLORS
Is that the planet of drugs? :dopekeen
Someone needs to make a psychodelic Keen mod...
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Grimson wrote:Woo, Rasputin.

You do realize the title screen looks all but horrible? The persons all look awkward, with mouths mirrored, white text disappearing on a bright background and strange, super-sayan hair errupting from a Keen clone. O man he needs to get his hair cut and fast.
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szemi wrote:
Grimson wrote:Woo, Rasputin.

You do realize the title screen looks all but horrible? The persons all look awkward, with mouths mirrored, white text disappearing on a bright background and strange, super-sayan hair errupting from a Keen clone. O man he needs to get his hair cut and fast.
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szemi wrote:
Grimson wrote:Woo, Rasputin.

You do realize the title screen looks all but horrible? The persons all look awkward, with mouths mirrored, white text disappearing on a bright background and strange, super-sayan hair errupting from a Keen clone. O man he needs to get his hair cut and fast.
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Alright, but i think what i did isn't awful.
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szemi wrote:Alright, but i think what i did isn't awful.
Let me put it this way: be mature and think about what you're going to say, or heck, even just consider what he was saying, constructive or not.
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