Next update: the story. Sorry for the double post right now(I won't double post anymore), but this must have own post.
So the story teaser:
It's 8 o'clock in the morning. Commander Keen gets up from his bed and his mother is cleaning the house.
After she was done with it, she went upstairs and popped in Keen's room:
- Good morning, my dear! - said his mom
- Hi, mom - said Keen
- I finished the big cleaning in the house, now your bedroom left.
- Alright, mom - said Keen and quickly put on his clothes
A few minutes later...
- All done, your room is now absolutely clear - said his mom happily
- Yay, thanks so much,mom!
Commander Keen checked out his room,but he saw a spot on his mirror. He tried to remove it, but hasn't succeeded.
After a lots of attempt he succeeded to remove the spot, but then the mirror transformed into a time portal-like thing.
Keen touched the portal-like thing,but it dragged him with itself.
After a short landing Keen was dropped to a room, which looks like his room, but everything is evil.
He checked out the strange room and found a picture on the wall, on which the person completely looks like him, but somehow other.
He went outside of the house and noticed a kid with a black helmet with letter M on top of it, looks like Mortimer McMire. Keen got his Neural Stunner and held to the unknown person:
- Alright, Mortimer! I know it's you. - yelled Keen
When the kid went nearer, Keen took a look at him and held his Stunner to him:
- Gotcha, I caught you, Mortimer McMire! - said Keen evilly
(And now he saw clearly the kid)
Our hero looked at him amazingly and was just waiting and waiting what will the kid do...And he shot Commander Keen. He took him into a strange cell machine looks like the Mangling Machine. When Keen got up, asked afraidly:
- Where am I?
- Hehe. I knew one day I'll catch you, Oppressor Keen! - said the kid
- Huh? Who are you and what are you talking about? - asked Keen angrily
- I'm Martinez McMeyer. I built a cell machine called the Miracle Machine to stop you, Oppressor Keen! - explained the kid
- But i'm not Oppressor Keen, I'm good boy and my name is Commander Keen. I'm the defender of the Universe! - said Keen
- Really?! - Martinez surprised
- Sure. - said Keen
- Pop quiz: You can see some flying saucer are coming from the sky to destroy the city.
Do you: a, leave them to destroy the city
b, destroy the city with them
c, rescue the city?
- Rescue the city! - answered Keen
- Holy cow! You are really good boy!!! - said Martinez amazingly
- Exactly. - said Keen and Martinez let him out from the cell machine.
After a lots of explaination...
- So what is the plan, Martinez? - asked Keen
- Well, I want to catch Oppressor Keen and his evil friends somehow. - said Martinez - And you can help me to save Mirrorsville from Oppressor Keen.
- Alright, we will do it!!! - said Keen with pleasure
Commander Keen and Martinez McMeyer must save the City of Mirrorsville from the evil Oppressor Keen and his friends.
I think it's a job for the two boy!
Yeah, piece of cake!