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Ceilick wrote:Congrats on a week's ban, ALMN.

jmfmagnum, feel free to continue your story. I had intended to offer some suggestions to make it more readable, along the same lines Grimson suggested, but now that you've removed it I can't really do so.
mmmmhh.....you are a administrator? because i `d like somebody to erase this thread, after all the fight and misunderstanding i want to start the thread again.... please
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well, we usually don't do it like that around here, but post your stuff again, and I'll be happy to remove this as an unneeded duplicate.
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tulip wrote:well, we usually don't do it like that around here, but post your stuff again, and I'll be happy to remove this as an unneeded duplicate.
you can`t just simply erase it?
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jmfmagnum wrote:you can`t just simply erase it?
tulip wrote:I'll be happy to remove this as an unneeded duplicate.
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jmfmagnum, I'm sorry to see that you feel that you've had a baptism of fire on this forum. :bloody
I've got Uni break in a few days and will have nothing to do. I'd like to see what you wrote, either back on this thread, in another thread or inboxed. :)
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Hey! I was reading that!
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ehem...so
i dunno how to link images to see tight in the page and not with the link to the host page (maybe cuz i cannot activate the html), but nevertheless, i must proceed , lately my time to write has become thinner....
but until then i at least got some of wanna-be comic

ignore the spanish little phrase i forgot to erase
the chapter name is:

--lunar morons--
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http://postimage.org/image/25so51kbo/
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Post by Grimson »

To show images in your post, put the link between the image tags, like this: [img]link[/img]
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img tags aren't a good idea if the image is larger than the screen. better keep it that way jmf.
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Post by Grimson »

tulip wrote:img tags aren't a good idea if the image is larger than the screen. better keep it that way jmf.
That, unless he uploads them to some other site (such as photobucket or imageshack) and posts small previews only with links to the actual images (done via [img]previewurl[/img]).
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ok let`s try out..

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...it works...
too bad , i have exams this week, after this i will continue writing...
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Your drawings are wickedballs. Also, your plot is a good'un.

I'd never really thought of Keen being the kind who rushes into things... but that makes sense I suppose. I mean, he's eight.
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kuliwil wrote:Your drawings are wickedballs. Also, your plot is a good'un.

I'd never really thought of Keen being the kind who rushes into things... but that makes sense I suppose. I mean, he's eight.
He looks like an adult in the above drawing. With that broad chin and overall face.
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actually... he is a teenager in my comic, the fun fact, when i was 16 i was as inmature as when i was 8, is a trait i find funny to add, i think it fits in the character as well :crazy

an, when i made this quick draw my nerve told me not to pain the skin...
cuz you know...white skin is more DOS and classic
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Post by jmfmagnum »

ok...double post time XD
so dyas ago i find an interesting document wrote by ceilick about ck fangames plot, i delayed writing the plot for my crazy idea to make me time to read it and understand it....

so for the time being i made some character sketchs
i want some opinions please


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i i still have the original concept if anywant want to see it
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