Artwork is fantastic, you've put the new orange color to good use. Everything about the use of colors and dithering is just right, not too pixelated or too bland.
Level design is also pretty solid, though I found it a little lacking in difficulty (I played on hard, as always).
Music is great, my favorite is the one playing on the first level, among others.
Story/setting is decent, though sometimes it felt like unnecessarily detailed meta text, while other times items crucial for the game and plot are barely mentioned (like the whole shield generator thing, it's never really elaborated on how or why it works). I guess that's why the Ormch memo or whatever it was called is its own extra chapter. I was also hoping for a plot twist or the story somehow evolving/expanding as you go, but I guess the game engine doesn't really support that.
Also some assorted questions:
- Are the Enkri incapable of speech?
- How could the Dorsal develop a space-faring civilization with no arms?
- Why did the Ormch ask Keen to do their dirty work instead of someone else? Surely they must've known from his reputation that he'll betray them in favor of saving the life on Ocflore.
- Are the Ormch, in fact, robots?
- Is there no scrolling story screen?
Also the jumping blue guys look like hobos wearing blue wizard garments

All in all this is an excellent Galaxy mod! I rate it four Yorps



